1a. The basketball court is one of the most crowded places in my neighbourhood. (Sight) The ground on the basketball court is clear white, made of cement. The marking on the floor is made clearly, every turn is made into a perfect 90 degree angle. The post stands tall, at around 2.4metres and the net is a perfect circle, just around the size of the basketball, but bigger to increase the chances of scoring.b. (Hearing) The sound is indeed unique. The beat of the ball is constant with one or more beats at the time. If it is just as synchronized, it will become a musical beat already.
c. (Sight) The panels on the street football court are colourful, to match the colour of the playground on the left. The lights stand tall and majestic and will shine brighter than the stars at night.
d. (Hearing) The cheers often come from both the courts. The winning cheers and the losing cheer, some of the teams, which they play serious for recreation, will cheer to do better if they lost and cheer if they won. All filled with joy.
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Personally, I think that this post is quite good as it depicts clearly how does the basketball court looks like such as talking about how tall is the post at the basketball court and so on. I also think that the part where you talk about using the different senses is quite good as this will allow the reader to feel as though he/she is at the scene.
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